Friday, January 18, 2008

Weekend Writing Workout #11 - Oh, the agony...

I've gotten to what I call the SLOGGY part of my story.

I've lost my way, it doesn't seem to be moving anywhere significant, and my characters don't seem motivated (i.e. I'm pushing them through the story instead of them leading me through it).

This is about the time when I look at every other idea I have and think... hmmm, maybe I should be working on that instead? Look, shiny object!

But I don't think switching stories is a good idea. I think it's best to push through the slog to the end and see what you've got.

It's time for some good old fashioned spontaneous writing. Writing from the gut. The wilder the better. When the inspiration seems to have left and I have to drag myself to the page, it's time to think outside the box.

(even if you're not in the slog, you can still play along)

Pick whatever piece of writing it is you're going to work on. See where you are and think about what comes next.

Step 1) Set your timer for 5-7 minutes. At the top of your page, write the start: The scene that needs to be written is... because...

After you finish with that thought, write This scene needs to be written because... and start the next thought. Keep writing This scene needs to be written because... until you hit something, an idea, and then take off! At this point, no more punctuation. Just write in one long stream of consciousness. REMEMBER to write without stopping, without crossing out, without editing. If you get stuck, you can always start again with This scene needs to be written because...

Example:

The scene that needs to be written is the scene where Mabbe confronts Croilus because it gets Mabbe outside of her burl. This scene needs to be written because it's where Zhay learns that Brigitta was telling the truth. It needs to be written because it's where Zhay loses it and all his anger about being abandoned by the Ancients bursts forth and he attacks Mabbe but she's too strong for him and she strikes him down and when that happens the spell seed falls to the ground and they...

Step 2) Set your timer for 5-7 minutes. Pick one of the following as your start line:

In this scene my protagonist learns...
In this scene my protagonist reveals...
In this scene my protagonist proves...

You can also put in another character if that works better for you. In this scene my villain, my antagonist, my protagonist's mother... feel free to make it work for you.

The important thing is that a character learns or reveals or proves something. This will help move your story forward.

Again, total stream of consciousness, no punctuation, no editing, no stopping. Allow yourself to write the first thing that comes out of your pen. It's not permanent! We're getting ideas

example:

In this scene Brigitta proves that she can fight the force of the green zynthia and she believes it has to do with her having both air and water elements now and she discovers that she is more powerful than before and the extra element has made it easier to manipulate her environment and there is no way to give it back and maybe it was her first true element...

Step 3) Set your timer for 3-5 Minutes. It's time for a "What if" wild flow! By wild I mean don't discount any thought or idea. Let the What Ifs fall where they may. This is a list that you write as fast as you can. You can simply start with What if... on each line, or use any of the following prompts:

During this scene, what if...
After this scene, what if...
After my protagonist reveals ____, what if...
After my protagonist learns ____, what if...
After my protagonist proves _____, what if...

example:

After Brigitta reveals that she can overpower the zythia...
what if Croilus realizes the prophesy is coming true?
What if Devin and Ferris attack Zhay?
What if Brigitta thinks Croilus is going to attack the White Forest?
What if Zhay tries to kill Croilus?
etc.

Usually at least one lightbulb goes on during this exercise. But you've got to just let go and allow it to happen. Write as fast as you can, keeping pen on the page. Afterwards, you can go back and mark items that you like.

You should now be sufficiently pumped to write the next scene! I know I am. I learned at least three things about where I'm going next.

Have a great weekend!

3 comments:

julia said...

Wow - this is just what I need right now. ('hmmm, maybe I should be working on that instead? Look, shiny object!')

I would like to copy this into my writing documents to use whenever I need to keep marching forward.

Aimless Writer said...

When I slog I think up new ways to torture my characters..heh, heh, heh...

Danika / OpenChannel said...

Julia,

I'm SO about the shiny objects... I need those blinders that horses wear to stay focused.

Feel free to copy and use any of the exercises, that's what they're for! I want them to be helpful.

Aimless,

That's also a good one. Perhaps I'll use that this weekend. Or putting up obstacles for characters. Sometimes we're too nice, or make things too easy, on our protagonist.

Make them struggle and suffer!