phobia
after much food and drink
I take a walk in the night
while Baby does the dishes
I turn down a dark street
I am not
frightened by the dark street we are in
Platanes,
and the most dangerous thing
I can think of
is the uncertain sidewalk
a motorcycle takes the corner
heads intentionally for me
at the last second veers
and speeds away
there isn’t any laughter
back at our hotel prepared
with my motorcycle story
I find my husband on the floor
keep your shoes on he says I dropped a wine bottle
there are shards in every corner
of the room this is his fear
right now he is frightened by bits of glass
when flying with my husband I figure
one of us should not be afraid as the plane dips
I take his damp hand and smile
I am frightened sometimes by herds of animals
because of the way they all move at once
one thought becomes all thought
all thought becomes sudden
I am not frightened by cherry blossoms
although they are just as sudden
and of one mind
but I’ve never
had to jump out of their way
and when they drop on stone floors
it is merely fragrant snow



10 comments:
May a times normal moments scare us!
Welcome to MPTR!
This was beautiful...your last two stanzas were soft but so powerful. You described the fears in us all so cleverly!
I loved this. I was right there in every scene as I read. :)
Cherry blossom like fragrant snow... Lovely description!
ps love the whatsit~thingy 'Monday poetry something or other'
I like the fact that you've managed to tackle with ease different kinds of phobia in this piece. The paranoia is palpable, pulse-drumming. ;) Cheers.
Fine work - imagery superb. Your blog is full of interesting posts - dropping bread crumbs to find my way back.
Hi Gautami... well, it's more like welcome back... I've been off the train for several months. Looking forward to interacting more now that my job is almost over... yippee!
Hi Tumblewords - yes, I hope people get lost in my blog and have to navigate back... I like when I get lost in blogs myself.
Thanks for stopping by S.L., STG, Fledgling... and Vicki - always great to "see" you. :-)
whoo hoo! this is awesome, danika!! love how it builds and evolves and turns corners and boom! there we are--smelling the spilt wine, the blossoms, the motorcycle exhaust!
hey, thanks, AP.
I can actually hear your voice reading this. It has your kind of rhythm.
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